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Welcome here!!
Since there is no posts here, i'd like to be the first to propose help to those who want get involved in english. I am a learner and it will be funny and benefict if we help each other. so one last sentence KEEP IN TOUCH!!!!
Hunter- sa commence bien
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Date d'inscription : 17/08/2009
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cooool tu parles anglais^^ alors je te previens je suis nul en anglais mais j'aimerai trop apprendre a le parler couramment donc sur cette rubrique j'essayerai de parler avc toi qu'en anglais et quand j'arriverai pas à dire quelque chose en anglais (ce qui, à mon avis, arrivera souvant!) je te l'écrirai en français et tu me traduiras, si t d'accord bien sur!! ^^" ok?!!
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A vos ordres chef!! mais je pense que ça va etre plus amusant et plus correcte si nous nous rendons sur la rubrique special anglais.Car cher admin a accepté d'ajouter cette rubrique specialisé en cette langues. Donc ya aucun problemes je serais a ta disponibilité et n'hesite surtout pas!!feel free to ask whatever you want.
Hunter- sa commence bien
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et bien oui c'est plus judicieux d'aller dans la rubrique anglais que j'ai fait spécialement pour ça ^^
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ah on peux parler en français
quand j'ai vu ce que t'as ecrit je me suis dis ne t'incruste pas
j'ai pour toi une chanson que j'ai ecrit
pas vraiment une chanson plutot une melodie
en anglais lol
Lost hearts
The days are followed and my life time after time takes a direction
Which is this feeling which takes to me suddenly
why this light me high of my way
days after days the troubles continue
come here and changes this practice which also injures me tormented.
come towards me and changes this stony heart into a flame which will never die out.
become my soul mate,
for me you were a revelation more than unforeseen; a puff of fresh air,
instead of me to injure you opened to me are to you arm and I became happy thanks to your devotion.
day after day I feel different my umor changes my face softens and all that thanks to you.
oh my darling it is as that which I would call you.
I do not know if I deserve you I hope to be one day has your height
a happy end I hope for it; like that of the accounts of facts. truths life is different.
this life will not last and then I will return in my sadness but I would live with the head high
and that will be the moment to give a little holidays has my heart.
and I would leave this world while being alone like formerly
quand j'ai vu ce que t'as ecrit je me suis dis ne t'incruste pas
j'ai pour toi une chanson que j'ai ecrit
pas vraiment une chanson plutot une melodie
en anglais lol
Lost hearts
The days are followed and my life time after time takes a direction
Which is this feeling which takes to me suddenly
why this light me high of my way
days after days the troubles continue
come here and changes this practice which also injures me tormented.
come towards me and changes this stony heart into a flame which will never die out.
become my soul mate,
for me you were a revelation more than unforeseen; a puff of fresh air,
instead of me to injure you opened to me are to you arm and I became happy thanks to your devotion.
day after day I feel different my umor changes my face softens and all that thanks to you.
oh my darling it is as that which I would call you.
I do not know if I deserve you I hope to be one day has your height
a happy end I hope for it; like that of the accounts of facts. truths life is different.
this life will not last and then I will return in my sadness but I would live with the head high
and that will be the moment to give a little holidays has my heart.
and I would leave this world while being alone like formerly
ismail- Admin
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Date d'inscription : 16/08/2009
Age : 34
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et bien dite moi ce que vous penser de mon texte
ismail- Admin
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hey hey! c'est pas mal du tout je veux bien commenter ce que tu a ecrit mais je sais pas quelle direction^^ en tout les cas c'est fort en sensation et heureuse la personne a qui tu pensais en ecrvant ces faits et dires.mais ce que je me demande est ce que t'a composé la musqie qui va avec?^^
Hunter- sa commence bien
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Date d'inscription : 17/08/2009
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et bien j'adore trop ce textes comme tout les autres d'ailleur !! é chui curieuse ossi pr savoir la mélodie ki va avec !
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j'ai traduit certains passages difficile a trouver lol
je suis pas un crack et je suis pas nul aussi
lol
et puis la music non j'ai juste mit les paroles j'ai demandé a moon ami le guiteriste de le faire et puis nothing
donc j'ai lessé tomber
je suis pas un crack et je suis pas nul aussi
lol
et puis la music non j'ai juste mit les paroles j'ai demandé a moon ami le guiteriste de le faire et puis nothing
donc j'ai lessé tomber
ismail- Admin
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Date d'inscription : 16/08/2009
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c très profond j'ai bien aimé: "stony heart into a flame"
c cool t'écris des textes t plutôt un romantique^^ lol
c cool t'écris des textes t plutôt un romantique^^ lol
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euh wé plutot romantik le grand messieur
P.S: ca fé un bail kon ta po appellé comme ca xD
P.S: ca fé un bail kon ta po appellé comme ca xD
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des fois oui et puis je vais metre un sujet ou tt le monde pourra metre ses oeuvres
et vous verrez tous ce que j'ai ecrit derniérement
et vous verrez tous ce que j'ai ecrit derniérement
ismail- Admin
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sayi skout rik fdehtni lol je rigole
ismail- Admin
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va dans discussion générale
ismail- Admin
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cella je prevoi d'en faireune chanson
The near future
Today is another day,
Today I am different,
Today is a new beginning,
I will do everything to succeed
My goal is now well traced,
I will conquer his heart
Same if its will take years to me,
Tomorrow will be another day
Tomorrow I would be better
I will remove this part of me
This part which blocks my being
I want to leave it and become again a man.
A man who ace not fear.
To show its feelings.
But always a question arises.
If I do so many efforts.
I will be reward has my right value.
The feeling which I carry towards my half.
He will be you sufficient so that she likes me.
The days pass and I do not change so much.
I so much have fear of showing my feelings.
Which is this feeling which corrodes me.
Today is a new day
Today I will remove my mask
I will inform him of part of my personality.
I see well that one is similar.
She and I suffered from passed so much.
But the problem it is that I became a friend.
Have its eyes
The desire for crying invaded me
The desire for shouting
The desire for shouting my love to him
But it became deaf
I became a pleasantry for it
With it I speak in the vacuum
By rejecting me my heart became cold
My heart became cig
Easy has to burn
the untouchable, indestructible man who I was front.
is now as fragile as a little girl it is afflicting.
but I do not reveal any emotion.
as in my practice.
and then the raised day
and I redevien have my loneliness
I become again the liar that everyone know
The near future
Today is another day,
Today I am different,
Today is a new beginning,
I will do everything to succeed
My goal is now well traced,
I will conquer his heart
Same if its will take years to me,
Tomorrow will be another day
Tomorrow I would be better
I will remove this part of me
This part which blocks my being
I want to leave it and become again a man.
A man who ace not fear.
To show its feelings.
But always a question arises.
If I do so many efforts.
I will be reward has my right value.
The feeling which I carry towards my half.
He will be you sufficient so that she likes me.
The days pass and I do not change so much.
I so much have fear of showing my feelings.
Which is this feeling which corrodes me.
Today is a new day
Today I will remove my mask
I will inform him of part of my personality.
I see well that one is similar.
She and I suffered from passed so much.
But the problem it is that I became a friend.
Have its eyes
The desire for crying invaded me
The desire for shouting
The desire for shouting my love to him
But it became deaf
I became a pleasantry for it
With it I speak in the vacuum
By rejecting me my heart became cold
My heart became cig
Easy has to burn
the untouchable, indestructible man who I was front.
is now as fragile as a little girl it is afflicting.
but I do not reveal any emotion.
as in my practice.
and then the raised day
and I redevien have my loneliness
I become again the liar that everyone know
ismail- Admin
- Messages : 1636
Date d'inscription : 16/08/2009
Age : 34
Localisation : ma chambre
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super beau texte mais ya quelques fautes! enfin je crois!!! comme l'avant dernière ligne: I become again has... I became again the liar... ^^" je croi je ss pas sur ok?!
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ya la traduction sur
sur l'autre sujet de recit et poemes
sur l'autre sujet de recit et poemes
ismail- Admin
- Messages : 1636
Date d'inscription : 16/08/2009
Age : 34
Localisation : ma chambre
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Hey hey désolé pour ce retard mais je suis en vacances!! pour notre poete, je pense que tu devras les ecrire directe en anglais (c'est ce que je pense) meme si au debut ça va etre un peu difficil mais ça viendra ...àa c sur...je me demande bien si je peux faire des chef d'oeuvres! je vais essayer d'ecrire quelque choses et voir ce que cela va donner!!
Hunter- sa commence bien
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